martes, 19 de abril de 2011

The place of my dreams…


A beautiful place where I can relax
Some birds fly quickly and play like children.
Something special makes me happy
Colorful flowers dance a lot and
A light wind talks to me in silence.
Big leaves are moved all the time and
The green and brilliant grass smile…
Different animals enjoy the day as me,
That all is perfect, nothing can be wrong

By Sofía Celiz 5to 3era

2 comentarios:

  1. I like this poem because it make me feel in calm. The frase "Colorful flowers dance a lot" is the most beautiful for me, because sometimes I want to be a flower like that.
    I hope you can feel happiness like in this poem!

    Mariana Perujo 5to 3era

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  2. Nicolas Rodriguez !8 de junio de 2011, 6:54

    Very beautiful poem
    Conveys a lot of peace and makes you imagine a place full of plants and animals
    I like the phrase "a beautiful place where I can relax" because it makes me imagine perfect place to be quiet

    By Nicolas Rodriguez 5to 3ra

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