domingo, 24 de abril de 2011

Passion!




A huge racing track,
Waiting for the roaring cars
Hot noisy engines on,
Like a harmonic choir
The accelerator coming up and down,
Makes pilots wanna shout
Some cars speeding up,
On the titanic racing track
The horn calling pilots to get ready,
Covers the event with adrenaline.


By Ailén Porta 5to 4ta

3 comentarios:

  1. I like this poem because it speaks of my favorite things are cars and speed
    this poem is good but I think I miss a little bit of expression a little more poetic verses
    and I feel the words indenificado speed and adrenaline that I like to play futboll and sports always use the speed and adrenaline
    or when I see cars racing it is the same

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  2. Aileen who rarely post anything in the file .. is very good poem, I love it because it spoke of something you like and expresses it as describing a career



    valentina..♥

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  3. Really one notices, that your passion they are the racing cars, I wish luck you and ojala the destination you cruse with a great engine, that funsione as your, really you are very intelligent and have very much to recognize ... segui your passion .......


    frankeli campusano 5to 4ta

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