martes, 19 de abril de 2011

Me and the lovely forest


Living in the forest it’s always special.
Waking up in here, makes me feel brilliant.

On the morning the bird are flying
and I am singing my favorite song.

It’s very lovely to breathe the perfume of the flowers,
because is the same smell that he has.

The wind pronounces his name with a warm voice.

And when the sun goes to sleep…
The cold night says hello to him.

Sometimes when the heaven is sad,
he cries over me and
all the dirty trees take a shower.

By Micaela Olivetto 5to 3era

3 comentarios:

  1. i like the poem because my attention the photo and description of the forest
    i think the phrase "And when the sun goes to sleep ... the cold night says hello to him "means the days is over .
    i feel indentify "with living in the forest it´s always special and wakes me brillant " because i feel very well in the place .


    Giuliana dirulle 5 3ª

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  2. great Mica! muy lindo el poema,I love the last part.
    I congratulate you.

    Manu V.

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  3. Ornella Nicodemo 5to 3ra8 de junio de 2011, 5:36

    I love the poem, i have no critiscm... I like very much the forest and y cent identified with the poem

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