martes, 19 de abril de 2011

Our destruction


A small river,and a forest
A big paper factory,and her consequence
Nice air changing from one moment to another
A bad toxic smoke enter in my body
A sweet melody the birds are singing
A cruel machine destroying everything on its way
How much the men can do?
Always exist the control to stop this
But the planet is still polluting and destroying
Unless we stop it going away anytime soon
The world as we know it came to an end very soon because of this
We take a joke that "the world will end"
But the day comes, it will be late to repent ..

By Nicolás Guevara 5to 4ta

2 comentarios:

  1. I like this poem because it's great as it captures the big global problem that affects the environment.The phrase "A bad toxic smoke enter in my body" is great because in a nice way represents us exposed to environmental conditions. I feel identify with this poem because I am very interested to analyze environmental issues.

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  2. I really like your poem is a very interesting topic, it is good to know that there are people who care about the environment, but unfortunately we all have to agree to save the world, there are many who say they are concerned and yet we still damaging,
    Beautiful poem!

    Lucia Tilli . 5to 3ra

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